A common thing with home made vids is overdoing the transitions. In the first part with all the pictures every change is a different transition. This looks like they are used like new toys and detracts from the video. Like I said, this is common when starting out making vids. Sometimes just changing the pics with less transitions will enhance the effect of the transitions you do use. Also choose transitions which seem to fit the feel of what you want to convey.
In the "Quickstang vs. Lightning" you left out the "t" in Lightning.
Another common issue among new video makers is the lack of the use of a tripod. A tripod will take out the shakiness. A rock solid camera really looks much more professional.
Your car looks nice and it certainly comes out of the hole well. Looks pretty cool pulling the front end up some too. I agree with what others have said, if we can't see the time clock please post times.
Steve